Tuesday, August 9, 2011

Can u check my writing?

After Eve dies, he faces to many big problems simultaneously; he lost his daughter to Twins and got a bad name behind him. However, he knew no quitting. He increased in acceleration when the tires began to break free. When it rained, he embraced the rain, rather than fighting with it or waiting it to stop. Even when he met Annika few months or years after she came to his house and make troubles, he tried to embrace her, rather than arguing with her. Also, he never looked back at the past. He always engaged in the present and prepared for the future. While he drove his car, he just focused on what he’s doing now and the track that is in front of him. When this philosophy was applied to his life, it prevented him from being depressed or lost the energy for so long, after he lost his wife Eve, his daughter Zoe and his teaching jobs, and when he was put into a false charge for raping. He was a champion in both racing the car; especially through the wet track, and through the bumpy track of life. He was the true champion not because he triumphed but because he could overcome obstacles, preferably of his own making, in order to triumph.

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